Nice, overall it's solid. The only revision I would give is to change the last pose of that moustache dude into something hilarious to match the theme of the audio.
Thank you for pushing the medium to extremes and taking risks with it, very refreshing to see. I look forward to stumbling upon more of your animation in the future. Cheers
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